The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts
illustrates
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the destination job and the average
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salaries after five years
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Anthropology
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an Anthropology
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graduate from one university.
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, The most graduated
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anthropology become a
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time
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worker,
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the type of employment with the highest
income
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is
government
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sector
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with, the majority of Anthropology graduates become a
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time
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worker at 52%. Afterwards, the second highest occupation by
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is part-
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work at 15% and
were
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unemployed at 3% lower.
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, the same percentage was for individuals who participated in
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time
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postgraduated
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postgraduate
study and unknown graduates. The lowest
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destination after
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people
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who have
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time
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work and postgraduate. Looking at the number of salaries data, the highest
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of
employee
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employees
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earned by individuals who worked in
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government
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the government
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sector
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from
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in
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range
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$
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100,000 at 50%,
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the freelance consultant and private companies only at 40% and 30%,
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.
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, the
government
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sector
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and freelance
consultant
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consultants
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get paid
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range
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$
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25,000-49,999 at 5% and $50,000-74,999 at 15%,
while
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the differences
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income
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in income
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of both in
salary
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the salary
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range
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$
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75,000-99,000 at 30%,
perpectively
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respectively
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, the percentage of private
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income
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in
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the range
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$
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25,000-49,000 higher
5
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% and $50,000-74,999 twice more than
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government
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the government
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sector
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,
while
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the salary in
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range
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the range
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$
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of $
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75,000-99,999 lower
5
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% than
government
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sector
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, income, government, sector, range with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate degree
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • sector
  • freelance/contract work
  • breakdown
  • proportion
  • engage in
  • categorize
  • significantly vary
  • academic positions
  • private companies
  • government positions
  • secure employment
  • undergraduates
  • destinations
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