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The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts
illustrates
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 the destination job and the average
of
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apply
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salaries after five years
by
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for
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Anthropology
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an Anthropology
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 graduate from one university.
Overall
, The most graduated
of
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anthropology become a
full
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time
 worker,
while
 the type of employment with the highest
income
achieve
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 is
government
sector
.
To begin
 with, the majority of Anthropology graduates become a
full
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time
 worker at 52%. Afterwards, the second highest occupation by
graduate
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graduates
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 is part-
time
 work at 15% and
were
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unemployed at 3% lower.
Moreover
, the same percentage was for individuals who participated in
full
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time
postgraduated
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postgraduate
 study and unknown graduates. The lowest
of
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destination after
graduate
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graduation
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 is
people
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for people
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 who have
half
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half-time
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time
 work and postgraduate. Looking at the number of salaries data, the highest
income
 of
employee
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employees
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 earned by individuals who worked in
government
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the government
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sector
from
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in
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range
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the range
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$
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100,000 at 50%,
while
 the freelance consultant and private companies only at 40% and 30%,
perspectively
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respectively
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.
Similarly
, the
government
sector
 and freelance
consultant
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consultants
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 get paid
range
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a range
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$
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25,000-49,999 at 5% and $50,000-74,999 at 15%,
while
 the differences
income
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in income
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 of both in
salary
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the salary
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range
$
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75,000-99,000 at 30%,
perpectively
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respectively
perspectively
.
In contrast
, the percentage of private
companies
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companies'
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income
 in
range
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the range
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$
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of $
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25,000-49,000 higher
5
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% and $50,000-74,999 twice more than
government
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the government
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sector
,
while
 the salary in
range
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the range
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$
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of $
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75,000-99,999 lower
5
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by 5
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% than
government
sector
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, income, government, sector, range with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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