The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The provided line graph illustrates the amount of opened and closed new shops in a particular area between two periods of time.
Overall
, both of pictured
graphs show a variation in their numbers. Correct article usage
the pictured
Although
the openings were more common than the closures
in 2011, the situation altered in favor
of the Change the spelling
favour
closures
at
the end.
Change preposition
in
Although
,
the number of shops that opened Remove the comma
apply
were
around 8500 in the first Change the verb form
was
year
, it plummeted for the following year
more
than Change preposition
to more
a
half of the previous amount and kept variating until Correct article usage
apply
the
2015 when it taped off Change the article
apply
on
four Change preposition
at
thousands
. Since Change to singular
thousand
then
, there was a very minor increase for
Change preposition
of
an
about one hundred in 2017 and right after that there was a significant decrease ending with Correct article usage
apply
a
3000 openings in the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
last
year
of provided data.
As for the closures
, they had a similar trend fluctuiating
for the first half of the period, demonstrating the highest peak reaching just above Correct your spelling
fluctuating
of
7000 shops following the slight decline in Change preposition
apply
the
2014. Since Change the article
apply
then
, the amount of closures
showed a significant downfall until 2015 and a significant rise in numbers with a
more than 4000 Correct article usage
apply
comparing
to the Wrong verb form
compared
year
before. For the least three years the line kept stable.Submitted by dnm.best on
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