The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic battles.

The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic battles.
The diagram
down
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below
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gives the process of recycling
plastic
bottles.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the process of recycling
plastic
container
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containers
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consists of some steps as collecting the
trash
, sorting, crushing, washing, producing
plastic
pellets and
we get
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getting
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ready
product
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products
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to use. The process begins
from
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with
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collecting
plastic
remains into the special
trash
can. After that, the
plastic
leftovers are picked
by
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up by
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garbage
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a garbage
the garbage
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truck,
then
which
take
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takes
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away the
trash
to the special recycling centre.
Trash
is sorted into 2 boxes, the first box is for bottles that can be produced again and the second box is for bottles that can not recycled again in the centre. In the next
step
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step,
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the compressed blocks that are made of leftovers are thrown to the crushing machine. During the following step after being
crushed
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crushed,
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all
remained
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remaining
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plastic
is washed and sent into the machine which produces
plastic
pellets. The
plastic
pellets
is
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are
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heated to form raw material. Since we get raw material, it can be produced into
plastic
stuff and
also
into clothes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, trash with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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  • plastic pollution
  • recycling process
  • collection
  • consumers
  • facilitating
  • disposing
  • environmental benefits
  • reduction
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  • resources
  • challenges
  • efficiency
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