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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK

the diagram illustrates how many different sources of
air
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pollutants
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 in the UK. There was a decrease in the number of
air
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 pollution in the UK in industry, household, and total
Air
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pollutants
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, with households witnessing the lowest decline consistently.
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 it was a stability in transport. The amount of source of
air
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pollutants
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 in households started at just over 7
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tonnes
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 in 1990, after which it experienced a significant drop to exactly 4
million
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tonnes
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, before ending the period at under that number.
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, the figure for industry went down from around 5
million
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tonnes
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 at the start to 2
million
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tonnes
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 in the final year. Under 1
million
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tonnes
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 of
air
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pollutants
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 in 1990 were produced by the household sector, with a decrease to almost 0 tons in 2005. Meanwhile, the figure for transport had just
leveled
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 off roughly at 1
million
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tonnes
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 from the beginning to the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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