The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according

to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table illustrates that about the information
of
Change preposition
on
show examples
social and economic indicators for different four
nations
such
as
Canada
,
Japan
,
Peru
and Zaire over the period
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
1994.
Overall
,
it is clear that
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
Japan
and
Canada
had the highest indicators among the given other
nations
.
According to the
Change preposition
The
show examples
table shows that
annual
Correct article usage
the annual
show examples
income per person
had
Verb problem
was
show examples
the highest earnings country of
Japan
, at 15760 dollars as compared to Zaire, which was
130$
Rephrase
only 130$
show examples
only. The second highest income
earners
Fix the agreement mistake
earner nation
show examples
nations
was
Canada
, at 111000$ and
Peru
had 160$.
Similarly
,
Japan
and
Canada
had led the first and second position
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
life expectancy at birth and accounted for 78 and 76 respectively.
Other
Correct article usage
The other
show examples
two
nations
were low 51 and 48.
In contrast
,
Canada
was
the
Change preposition
in the
show examples
highest position than
Japan
which was daily
calories
Change the noun form
calorie
show examples
supply per person, at 3326 and 2846 respectively.
Peru
and Zarie had 1927 and 1749. Surprisingly,
Canada
and
Japan
has
Change the verb form
have
show examples
the same proportion of the adult literacy rate
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
show examples
for 99 per cent
while
68% of
Peru
and 34% of Zarie.
Submitted by reanudeepan on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nations, canada, japan, peru with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: