The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table illustrates that about the information
of
social and economic indicators for different four Change preposition
on
nations
such
as Canada
, Japan
, Peru
and Zaire over the period in
1994.
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of
Overall
, it is clear that
,
Remove the comma
apply
Japan
and Canada
had the highest indicators among the given other nations
.
According to the
table shows that Change preposition
The
annual
income per person Correct article usage
the annual
had
the highest earnings country of Verb problem
was
Japan
, at 15760 dollars as compared to Zaire, which was 130$
only. The second highest income Rephrase
only 130$
earners
Fix the agreement mistake
earner nation
nations
was Canada
, at 111000$ and Peru
had 160$. Similarly
, Japan
and Canada
had led the first and second position of
life expectancy at birth and accounted for 78 and 76 respectively. Change preposition
in
Other
two Correct article usage
The other
nations
were low 51 and 48.
In contrast
, Canada
was the
highest position than Change preposition
in the
Japan
which was daily calories
supply per person, at 3326 and 2846 respectively. Change the noun form
calorie
Peru
and Zarie had 1927 and 1749. Surprisingly, Canada
and Japan
has
the same proportion of the adult literacy rate Change the verb form
have
accounted
for 99 per cent Wrong verb form
accounting
while
68% of Peru
and 34% of Zarie.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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