The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The graph
give
data regarding the figure Change the verb form
gives
in
every twelve Change preposition
for
month
Change to a plural noun
months
of
Change preposition
for
rentals
and sales
of film from distinct store
between 2002 and 2011.
Fix the agreement mistake
stores
Overall
, the four store
saw unsimilar trend in the time period. The Change to a plural noun
stores
rentals
and VHS sales
experience go
down extremely, Wrong verb form
went
while
DVD sales
with a
Remove the article
apply
some
significant increase between 2002 and 2007 but after that Correct quantifier usage
apply
decrease
slightly, the Wrong verb form
decreased
Blue-ray
Correct your spelling
Blu-ray
sales
move
up gradually but not over 50,000 number that sold.
As the graphs Wrong verb form
moved
shows
, the number of Change the verb form
show
rentals
saw a big down started at approximately 185,000 in 2002. Then
, it fell slightly until it declined to just over 50,000 in 2011. Afterward
, the trend of VHS Change the spelling
Afterwards
sales
actually has
Wrong verb form
had
similar
pattern with Add an article
a similar
Rentals
which started from
about 56,000 and ended Change preposition
at
on
10,000 in 2005. Change preposition
at
Then
, DVD
Change preposition
for DVD
sales
, between 2002-2007 the figure move
up Wrong verb form
moved
to
from 58,000 and Change preposition
apply
land
up 200,000. At a later time, Wrong verb form
landed
this
figure subsequently
fell to about 190,000 in 2011.
By contrast
, the annual number of Blu-ray sales
stood at a small climb that begin
Wrong verb form
began
just
over 0 and Change preposition
at just
end up
at about 20,000 Wrong verb form
ended
in
between 2007 and 2011.Change preposition
apply
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