The table gives information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries.

The table gives information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries.
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The provided table outlines the count of technology researchers per million people in Mexico,
Turkey
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, Poland,
Moldova
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, and
Togo
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across the years 2003 to 2007.  
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two countries encountered successful growth of people dedicated
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domain
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three others fluctuated its numbers.
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,
Turkey
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had an increasing potential
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savants who work in technology,
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Togo
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had the highest peak in 2005
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mirroring the statistics from 2003 to 2004 in 2005 to 2006.
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Turkey
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showcased a consistent upward trajectory, starting at 47 in 2003 and reaching 106 in 2007. A noteworthy observation is Mexico's varying figures, summiting at
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in 2005 before a decline in subsequent years. Poland,
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, experienced a steady decline, plummeting from 285 in 2003 to 226 in 2007.
Moldova
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and
Togo
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displayed variations in their trends, with
Moldova
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starting at 103 in 2003 and ending at 114 in 2007.  The data underscores the diverse trajectories of technological research across these nations.
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Mexico faced volatility,
Turkey
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demonstrated sustained growth, and Poland witnessed a decline.
Moldova
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and
Togo
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,
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, experienced nuanced shifts in their researcher counts.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey, moldova, togo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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