The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Those presented maps indicate some information about alters in the Central

library

in 20 years.

Overall

, it can be seen that most of the changes have happened in

this

library

at four corners of

this

map.

Furthermore

, some facilities

such

as furniture have been added or omitted all over

this

library

. At the centre of

this

library

, tables and chairs have been removed to avoid traffic congestion in front of the entrance. On the right side of

this

complex, Adult non-

fiction

books

have been equipped with an information desk and Self-service machines. It seems remarkable that its name has been changed to Adult

fiction

books

. Considering the southern and the northern parts of the Adult

fiction

books

, the Enquiry desk and Children`s

books

have been respectively replaced with a café and lecture room. Looking at the left side of the

library

, “Adult

fiction

books

” after giving up its

place

to the All reference

books

have been moved to the right side of the map. Looking to the northern west of the complex, “CDs, videos, computer games” have been replaced by a

place

for telling stories equipped with furniture and children`s

fiction

books

Finally

, in the southern west of the maps, you can see there`s no

place

for reading magazines and newspapers and after 20 years, computers have taken up their

place

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, fiction, place with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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