The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Those presented maps indicate some information about alters in the Central
library
in 20 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the changes have happened in
this
library
at four corners of
this
map.
Furthermore
, some facilities
such
as furniture have been added or omitted all over
this
library
. At the centre of
this
library
, tables and chairs have been removed to avoid traffic congestion in front of the entrance. On the right side of
this
complex, Adult non-
fiction
books
have been equipped with an information desk and Self-service machines. It seems remarkable that its name has been changed to Adult
fiction
books
. Considering the southern and the northern parts of the Adult
fiction
books
, the Enquiry desk and Children`s
books
have been respectively replaced with a café and lecture room. Looking at the left side of the
library
, “Adult
fiction
books
” after giving up its
place
to the All reference
books
have been moved to the right side of the map. Looking to the northern west of the complex, “CDs, videos, computer games” have been replaced by a
place
for telling stories equipped with furniture and children`s
fiction
books
.
Finally
, in the southern west of the maps, you can see there`s no
place
for reading magazines and newspapers and after 20 years, computers have taken up their
place
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, fiction, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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