The bar chart illustrates the amount of hours that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists used per day to do 3 activities

The bar chart illustrates the amount of hours that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists used per day to do 3 activities
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The bar chart depicts the amount of
time
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spent on each holiday activity by
tourists
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from various origins, namely from China, The United States, Turkey, and Brazil.
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,
tourists
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from different nations have different leisure activity patterns. Those coming from China and The United States enjoyed reading books the most
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the Turkish and Brazilians allocated the bulk of their
time
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to be at the
beach
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. From the graphs, it can be concluded that
tourists
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from China and America allocated most of their leisure
time
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to reading books.
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, Chinese
tourists
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spent more
time
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reading than the Americans by a significant margin of 3 hours.
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, the two countries prefer to stay at the
beach
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rather than to visit places.
Tourists
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coming from Turkey and Brazil have different choices of activities. Notably, rather than to read books, they used the lion's share of their
time
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to stay at the
beach
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. Despite sharing the same habit of going to the
beach
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, Brazilians spend 1 hour more than the Turkish.
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, the Turkish and Brazilians allocate the least of their
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for visiting places, with each sparing 3 hours and 2 hours of their
time
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, tourists, beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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