IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 2.5

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no denying the fact that speaking complex concept.
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 and they have to speak
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 many problems. There is
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 practical issue.
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enough knowledge to speak with different
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 and determination to start
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foreign
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is approximately 15% which is
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 number. Another point to consider, speaking with native
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 their skills. It is
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different languages with someone
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will help them to
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speak with
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people
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, making conversation with foreign
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will help them and support them
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 their interview and presentation in
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futur
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future
. In conclusion, despite
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 having a different view, I believe that speaking is
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, and should all
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 realize its importance.

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Structure
Ensure clear introduction and conclusion sections are present. Your introduction should clearly state your opinion or answer to the question, while your conclusion should summarize your main points and restate your view in different words.
Structure
Use paragraphs to organize your essay clearly. Each paragraph should introduce a single main idea, supported by examples or explanations. Avoid mixing multiple ideas within a single paragraph.
Content
Work on providing specific and relevant examples to support your main points. Your examples should clearly relate to the topic and help reinforce your argument or perspective.
Content
Improve the clarity and comprehensiveness of your ideas by planning your essay before writing. Make sure each paragraph contributes to your overall argument or answer to the question.
Content
Focus on developing a logical structure for your essay. Start from introducing the topic, followed by presenting arguments for or against it, and conclude by summarizing your points and restating your standpoint.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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