The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The first pie chart illustrates the average proportion of
energy
consumed in Australian households, whereas
the second graph reveals the figures for emissions
of greenhouse
gases
resulting from the mentioned energy
usage.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that the heating and water
heating groups account for the largest and second-largest amount
of energy
consumption in Australia, respectively. Moreover
, it can be seen that water
heating and cooling emit the highest and lowest amounts of greenhouse
gases
, respectively.
Among all categories, heating accounts for the largest amount
of energy
usage, using 42% of all energy
. Furthermore
, water
heating, which is placed in second place, consumes twice as much energy
as the other appliance category (15%). It is worth noting that the energy
consumption of other categories is insignificant compared with these three groups.
With regard to the amount
of greenhouse
gases
that are released, the ratio of emissions
from water
heating is the largest, which is around one-third of all emissions
. This
is roughly equal to the emission of the other appliance method (28%). Furthermore
, the figure for the amount
of greenhouse
gases
that the heating emits is approximately equal to that of the refrigeration. The numbers for the emissions
by other groups, being less than 10%, can be ignored.Submitted by datnguyen220707 on
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