The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations demonstrate the
offered
two variations Verb problem
apply
to
an Change preposition
of
office
building.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the first illustration represents a typical Japanese Linking Words
office
, and all chairs and Use synonyms
desks
in the Use synonyms
office
are planned to Use synonyms
placed
around Add a missing verb
be placed
section
Use synonyms
managers
' Use synonyms
desks
. The latter diagram shows a typical American Use synonyms
office
plan with Use synonyms
subdivision
of manager rooms on the right Correct article usage
a subdivision
side
and different facilities on the left Use synonyms
side
are planned to Use synonyms
divided
Add a missing verb
be divided
from
chairs and Change preposition
into
desks
.
The first offer of a typical Japanese Use synonyms
office
is set to have Use synonyms
a windows
just behind the department manager's location. All chairs and Correct the article-noun agreement
a window
windows
desks
will be placed in front of the Use synonyms
section
Use synonyms
managers
' locations, and Use synonyms
therefore
, Linking Words
section
Use synonyms
managers
can keep in touch with 6 Use synonyms
desks
during their Use synonyms
works
and meetings.
The second proposed change to a former Fix the agreement mistake
work
office
building is a typical American Use synonyms
office
. In Use synonyms
this
suggestion, 8 L-shaped Linking Words
desks
are set to located in the Use synonyms
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
office
and department manager and Use synonyms
section
Use synonyms
managers
will be isolated from Use synonyms
desks
, Use synonyms
Wrong verb form
located
locating
on the right Wrong verb form
located
side
of the Use synonyms
office
. Some facilities Use synonyms
such
as conference rooms, storage, and printer Linking Words
copier
will be placed on the left Fix the agreement mistake
copiers
side
of the Use synonyms
office
.Use synonyms
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