The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The bar chart and line graph illustrate the
number
of participants
in the Olympics
during
1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012. In more detail, the bar chart compares the amount of female and male Change preposition
in
participants
on
the same period.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the number
of athletes participate
in the Wrong verb form
participating
Olympics
has significantly increased since it began. In 1924, there was
only about 3.000 Change the verb form
were
participants
, but, this
number
increased to about 5.000 participants
in 1952. The number
of participants
constantly increased in 1984 and 2012, accounted
for more than 6.000 and 11.000 Wrong verb form
accounting
participants
, respectively.
Since it began, the Olympics
has always been involving male and female athletes. However
, there is a significant grow
of female Replace the word
growth
participants
in 2012 compared to 1924. In 1952, there was
only less than 500 female Change the verb form
were
participants
in the Olympics
. After 32 years, the number
of female participants
almost tripled, accounted
for almost 1500 Wrong verb form
accounting
person
in 1984. The Fix the agreement mistake
people
number
of female athletes involved in teh
Correct your spelling
the
Olympics
peaked in 2012 with almost 5000 participants
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