The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The bar chart and line graph illustrate the
number
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of
participants
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in the
Olympics
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during
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in
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1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012. In more detail, the bar chart compares the amount of female and male
participants
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on
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the same period.
Overall
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, the
number
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of athletes
participate
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in the
Olympics
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has significantly increased since it began. In 1924, there
was
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only about 3.000
participants
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, but,
this
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number
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increased to about 5.000
participants
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in 1952. The
number
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of
participants
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constantly increased in 1984 and 2012,
accounted
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for more than 6.000 and 11.000
participants
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, respectively. Since it began, the
Olympics
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has always been involving male and female athletes.
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, there is a significant
grow
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of female
participants
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in 2012 compared to 1924. In 1952, there
was
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only less than 500 female
participants
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in the
Olympics
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. After 32 years, the
number
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of female
participants
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almost tripled,
accounted
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accounting
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for almost 1500
person
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people
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in 1984. The
number
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of female athletes involved in
teh
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the
Olympics
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peaked in 2012 with almost 5000
participants
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, olympics with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Olympic Games
  • participants
  • historical context
  • trend
  • exponential growth
  • influence
  • world events
  • diversity
  • technological advancements
  • global
  • gender equality
  • International Olympic Committee (IOC)
  • unity
  • competition
  • athletes
  • entry
  • represent
  • delegation
  • boycotts
  • milestones
  • parity
  • inclusive
  • disciplines
  • legacy
  • sponsorship
  • admission
  • elite sportspeople
  • national pride
  • cultural exchange
  • ambassadors
  • sportsmanship
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