The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of American
people
who ate fast food
at restaurants from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, in 2003, the largest percentage of American people
ate fast food
once a week
, whereas
the daily consumption of fast food
had the least popularity. Moreover
, in 2006, the popularity of fast food
increased compared to 2003 in several times
a week
, once a week
, and a few times
a year groups. It can be implied that the proportion of people
who refrained from eating fast food
in 2006 was equal to that of 2013.
In 2003, most American people
preferred to eat fast food
on a weekly basis with nearly 31%, while
the lowest percentage of people
went to fast food
restaurants with 4%. Furthermore
, in 2006, the figures for fast food
consumption several times
a week
, once a week
, and a few times
a year were higher than in 2003 at 20%, 33%, and 15%, respectively. Finally
, it is worth noting that the proportion of people
who were reluctant to eat fast food
in 2006 and 2013 was equal to approximately 4%.Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, week, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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