The graph illustrates the amount of visitors in Europan areas ( coast, mountains and lakes) from 1987 to 2007.

The graph illustrates the amount of visitors in Europan areas ( coast, mountains and lakes) from 1987 to 2007.
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The following line graph depicts the total proportion of travellers in a European region ( the coast, the mountains, the lakes) in the 20-year period of time. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the numbers to increase were the coast and the mountains,
while
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the lakes decreased except for a huge jump. Units are measured in thousands.
According to
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the figure, the
coast
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at first stood at exactly 40,000 and peaked at just over 70
thousand
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in the end except for a gradual plummet between 1987 and 1992.
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, the mountains began from 20
thousand
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, in the beginning, to rise slowly by 10 in 1997 and stayed at the same level over the next 5 years to go up approximately a rough 3
thousand
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. As for remaining,
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the lakes started from 10
thousand
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in 1987 to climb dramatically and reached the highest quantity in 2002,
it
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they
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dropped roughly by around 20
thousand
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in the final year surveyed.

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