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More and more countries are making University education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

#countries #university #education #citizens #development
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There is no different type of objective fact that
this
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 about countries making University education completely free for their citizens is prevalent in our reality because of its importance. Most
people
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 agree with
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 because of its many benefits. Some of the
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 highlight its
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. I would like to discuss the
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 and the
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 in my next paragraphs the same. Describe different types of
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 I would like to mention the first and foremost advantage which is the chance that
people
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 can have an education without any fees. Another advantage that might come to mind of
people
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 might be it is educational
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. So, there are many different types of
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 that we can describe now but I would like to discuss my next paragraph. On its darker side, there are some
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 that make it problematic and worrying, I would like to highlight two
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. First is that it might become a financial problem for many countries.
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there are causes of different types of conflicts. I think there are many shortcomings of
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 kind and we can talk about
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 all the time. Now I want to speak about my conclusion. Concluding the above
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, neither its negative nor the positive sides can be ignored. In my opinion, the positive and the negative sides are mixed processes in our life that follow each other and they should be considered more generalized.
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, I remain of the opinion that it is not necessary to ignore the
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 and
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 and to outline their impact in reality
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear structure with distinct introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use connecting words to guide the reader through your argument.
coherence cohesion
Present and develop your ideas clearly. Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Use examples to support your arguments.
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Fully address all parts of the task. Provide a balanced discussion of advantages and disadvantages, supported by specific examples.
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Improve the clarity of your writing by avoiding overly complex sentences that can confuse the reader. Aim for precision and simplicity.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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