The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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The graph below illustrates various kinds of vehicles used for travel and work in one European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.
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, it is clearly seen that the modes of transportation that
people
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used in the past are rapidly changing between train,
car
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, tube, or bus.
To begin
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with, in 1960, most folks went by bus as their option, it was the most popular vehicle at that time, more than 30 individuals used it and only a few
people
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operated their
car
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. In 1980, society travelled by train, counted about 20 using it,
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there were increasing number of cars, buses, and tubes increased as well.
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in 2000, there was a significant transformation in individuals using their
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car
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cars
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, making the
car
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the highest rank among other vehicles, because more than 35
people
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went in it. When cars were rising, buses had a fatal declining trend, with only 15
people
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passengers over the year.
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