A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter •Explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. •Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. •Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
letter is pertaining to apply
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applying
a
unpaid work activity. As I saw the Correct article usage
an
advertisment
in newspaper Correct your spelling
advertisement
hence
I am writing this
letter to explain my relevant skills and experience.
Firstly
, I have been working as a
unpaid delegate Change the article
an
in
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on
different-different
occasions and Correct your spelling
different
locations
, near my office or Change preposition
in locations
accomodation
areas. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Which
I like the most Correct pronoun usage
What
to
contribute sometime in Add a missing verb
is to
such
kind
of places Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
like
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as
museum
.
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museums
Moreover
, I am associated with few
of the reputed NGOs where I always contribute Correct article usage
a few
somthing
with respect to the requirements. based on these activities I am much Correct your spelling
something
intrested
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interested
for
your given place as well and to be a part of Change preposition
in
this
wherein, I can show my skills and qualities without any chargeble
fees.
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chargeable
charged
In addition
to
, as I am a working Change preposition
apply
proffesional
in the IT company and they provide the facility of certain flexible timings in terms of coming and leaving Correct your spelling
professional
office
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the office
accordingly
, I can easily manage availbility
at your place based on your Correct your spelling
availability
prefer
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preferred
timings
. I am looking forward Replace the word
times
your
positive reply.
Thanks in advance.Change preposition
to your
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task response
To improve task response, ensure that your letter fully addresses all parts of the task. Explicitly state why you want to volunteer at the museum, describe your skills and qualities in detail, and provide clear details about your availability. Include specific examples to support your claims.
coherence cohesion
For better coherence and cohesion, organize your ideas more clearly and logically. Start with an introduction that clearly states the purpose of your letter. Then, structure your letter into paragraphs, each focused on a single idea (your interest in volunteering, your skills and availability). Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
greeting closing
Improve your greeting and closing by using more appropriate formal language. Instead of the informal 'Thanks in advance,' consider using 'I look forward to your positive response, thanking you in advance.' This adds a touch of professionalism.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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