The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line chart illustrates the tourists number of in three places in the European nations from 1987 to 2007.
overall
, most visitors were on the beach. Linking Words
While
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,
other places had fewer people. Remove the comma
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However
, the number of foreign individuals increased in all places Linking Words
according to
the period given.
On the one hand, There was a steady increase in the number of coastal visitors from 40 Linking Words
thousand
to around 75 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2007. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the tourists of to the lake grew dramatically from 10 Linking Words
thousand
to over 75 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2002 before declining to 50 50,000 in 2007.
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on the other hand
, in 1987, 20 Linking Words
thousand
people visited the mountain, Use synonyms
then
went up slightly to approximately 35 Linking Words
thousand
in 2007.Use synonyms
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