The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line chart illustrates the tourists number of in three places in the European nations from 1987 to 2007.
overall
, most visitors were on the beach. While
,
other places had fewer people. Remove the comma
apply
However
, the number of foreign individuals increased in all places according to
the period given.
On the one hand, There was a steady increase in the number of coastal visitors from 40 thousand
to around 75 thousand
in 2007. Moreover
, the tourists of to the lake grew dramatically from 10 thousand
to over 75 thousand
in 2002 before declining to 50 50,000 in 2007.
on the other hand
, in 1987, 20 thousand
people visited the mountain, then
went up slightly to approximately 35 thousand
in 2007.Submitted by hafsaalbadi199 on
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