Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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citizen what problems can

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face in ten years in their opinion,

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think 90% of them will answer that

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will have air pollution problems.

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very

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obvious and disappointing fact but

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true. If you go up to Medeo you can clearly see the difference between pure sky and smog. The reason

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air pollution is

increasing

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quantity of fabrics and cars. If

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of cars increases, there will be more

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traffics

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. If there is a

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of

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, they are going to build more roads to solve the

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traffics

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problem. If they build more roads, people will continue to buy cars and pollute the air.

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called red queen syndrome.

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when the

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is not really

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a solution

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, it makes

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. The best

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of

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this

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problem would be

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a subway

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or something like LRT in Astana, which was not finished yet but

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is another story. It would be

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because in Almaty we have a

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of

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and only one line of subway. Speaking about

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in

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, it is developing. But I’m not

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about

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education

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. We have a

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of great courses which most of the time give you wonderful results and experience. But if we

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about

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, to be

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it started to be unnecessary unless you work in some government places. A

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students

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of students

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started work

while

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studying in the

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. And they got much experience at work rather than in the

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. I think in ten years there will be 2 options. Most young people will not go

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in the

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, they will

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some courses in better case. In the worst

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they will

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abroad which badly

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on

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apply

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economy. Because they will bring the money out of

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.

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good

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would be

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government to pay attention to

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university

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the university

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studying process. At least it would be great to make

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university

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education

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cheaper or more available for residents.

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parents are looking for the

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for their children to

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in, they are choosing between

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in

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and

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abroad.

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abroad is much better and

effective

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with

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the same price. But let’s see. I hope my thoughts about

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and

environment

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are wrong and they will be better in 10 years