You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

If you ask any

Kazakhstan

citizen what problems can

Kazakhstan

face in ten years in their opinion,

i

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think 90% of them will answer that

Kazakhstan

will have air pollution problems.

It’s

very

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obvious and disappointing fact but

it’s

true. If you go up to Medeo you can clearly see the difference between pure sky and smog. The reason

of

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for

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air pollution is

increasing

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the increasing

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quantity of fabrics and cars. If

quantity

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the quantity

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of cars increases, there will be more

traffics

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traffic

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. If there is a

lot

of

traffics

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traffic

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, they are going to build more roads to solve the

traffics

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traffic

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problem. If they build more roads, people will continue to buy cars and pollute the air.

It’s

called red queen syndrome.

It’s

when the

solution

is not really

solution

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a solution

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, it makes

worse

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it worse

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. The best

solution

of

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to

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this

problem would be

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a subway

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subway

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or something like LRT in Astana, which was not finished yet but

it

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apply

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is another story. It would be

great

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solution

because in Almaty we have a

lot

of

traffics

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traffic

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and only one line of subway. Speaking about

education

in

Kazakhstan

, it is developing. But I’m not

telling

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talking

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about

university

education

. We have a

lot

of great courses which most of the time give you wonderful results and experience. But if we

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about

university

education

, to be

honest

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it started to be unnecessary unless you work in some government places. A

lot

students

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of students

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started work

while

studying in the

university

. And they got much experience at work rather than in the

university

. I think in ten years there will be 2 options. Most young people will not go

study

in the

universities

, they will

study

some courses in better case. In the worst

case

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case,

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they will

study

abroad which badly

influence

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influences

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on

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apply

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Kazakhstan

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Kazakhstan's

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economy. Because they will bring the money out of

Kazakhstan

.

The

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good

solution

would be

the

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for the

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government to pay attention to

university

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the university

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studying process. At least it would be great to make

the

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university

education

cheaper or more available for residents.

Because when

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When

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parents are looking for the

universities

for their children to

study

in, they are choosing between

universities

in

Kazakhstan

and

universities

abroad.

University

abroad is much better and

effective

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more effective

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with

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at

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the same price. But let’s see. I hope my thoughts about

education

and

environment

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the environment

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are wrong and they will be better in 10 years