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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations.
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The table illustrates the highest populations in
China
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, India and the USA.
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,
China
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 has the most people in the country.
In
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contrast
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 India has a rapid growth of
population
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, and the USA has the most massive
population
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 living in urban areas. As we can see obviously there are 1.415 billion as
China
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 citizens, which is the hugest number of individuals and the land area among the three countries, which respectively is 1.415 billion
population
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 and 9.388 million square kilometers.
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, its rate of
population
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 increase is the lowest since 2017.
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, the USA has just 237 million people with the highest rate of them, which is 83%, living in urban areas.
On the other hand
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, India has the approximate
population
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 of
China
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, around 1.354 billion. But it has the most rapid rate, 1.11%, of
population
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 increase and has the highest density among 3 countries, which is 455 people per square kilometre.
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, it has the lowest land area, about 2.973 million square kilometres.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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