In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
It is true that there are areas where people starving,
while
farming practices have gotten better than before. There are various reasons that lead to Linking Words
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essay will cite some of these. 
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going
better condition every day Verb problem
getting
due to
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technology
advancement. Replace the word
technological
While
there are places Linking Words
where
consume advanced ways for cultivating crops, the prior determination Correct word choice
that
of harvesting
a great deal of crops is associated with their soil erosion and Change preposition
to harvest
streem
weather Correct your spelling
severe
condition
. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
For instance
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countries
from Use synonyms
north
of Russia, which are faced with long-term cold seasons may have difficulty Correct article usage
the north
for
collecting and reserving Change preposition
apply
of
their Food supplies. Change preposition
apply
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countries
where poverty is Use synonyms
their
notable problem, Change the word
a
due to
their weak economic system.
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On the other hand
, what can Linking Words
be count
as a privilege in recent times is that we live in Change the verb form
be counted
technology
and science era. Correct article usage
a technology
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countries
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where
need to enrich their soil and water Correct word choice
that
as well as
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coping
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cope
weather
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the weather
condition
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conditions
,
should have Remove the comma
apply
determine
environmentalists, searching about fundamental reasons. Change the verb form
determined
This
matter cannot be done by significant investment from governments. Linking Words
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in
advanced Change preposition
apply
countries
should form associations which can send Use synonyms
aids
and social services to where have to deal with poverty like Ethiopia or other poor Fix the agreement mistake
aid
countries
.
In conclusion, flourishing in agricultural means and ways does not mean there would Use synonyms
have
any lack of harvest and food supply. Verb problem
be
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matter, administrations and people who are in charge, can take actions to deal with it.Linking Words
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