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Band 3

Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

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many
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 people believe that public
transport
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 should be free in
a
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apply
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large cities. I strongly agree with that idea
becuse
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because
 the advantage
outweigh
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 the disadvantage.
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firstly
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, its common
believe
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belief
 that free public
transport
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 may help students and
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 workers .free public
transport
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 exactliy in big
cities
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 may support students and workers to reduce their expenses.
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for
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 example, most
of
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students and workers spend alot amount of
money
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in
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transport
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 that will assist them to save more
money
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.
more over
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, another benefit is that it can reduce traffic
cogestion
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congestion
 and air pollution.
if
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 the public transpot have been free for every person these may decrease traffic
cogestion
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congestion
.
for inestance
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less
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 people will use their private cars
and
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 that will
reduce
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also
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 air pollution.
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on
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 the other hand , free public
transport
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 may cost the
goverment
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government
 a large amount of
money
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and
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these
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 will
effect
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 the economy of the country
not
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onlyy
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only
 the city.
if
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 the
transport
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have been
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free
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free,
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 most
of
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people will use the free public transoprt
due to
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 dont need to pay from their own budget.
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to
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 sum up ,
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 free public
transportion
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transportation
 may cost
goverments alot
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governments a lot
 of
money
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,
i
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 believe it has more advantages
becuse
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because
 it can reduce traffic congestion on streets and air pollution .

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Write one clear idea in each body part, then add one short reason and one real example.
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Answer the question more fully. You agree, so explain why the good points are stronger than the bad point.
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Use examples with more detail. Your examples are very general now.
coherence and cohesion
Put ideas in a clear order: intro, good point 1, good point 2, bad point, ending.
coherence and cohesion
Use easy linking words well, like First, Also, However, and In the end.
coherence and cohesion
Check that each sentence connects clearly to the one before it.
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You gave a clear opinion from the start and kept it to the end.
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You wrote about both sides, so your answer is complete.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has an introduction, body parts, and a conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Most ideas follow a simple order and are easy to follow.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public transport
  • urban environment
  • economic benefits
  • local businesses
  • traffic congestion
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • social inclusion
  • marginalized groups
  • service quality
  • overcrowding
  • funding
  • transport services
  • financial burden
  • accessibility
  • essential services
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