You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: apologise for the damage to the item explain what happened say how you are going to fix the issue
Dear Mike,
How are you getting on? I hope you are doing well at university. The reason why I am writing is to apologise to you for the damage I caused to your bicycle.
As you know, I borrowed your bike to get to my granny's in the next neighbourhood
last
Sunday. On my way there, the rear tyre got punctured as there were broken glasses on the road. I sincerely apologize for my neglect and carelessness for it.
To clarify the situation, I set off on my journey to my grandmother's at sunset and I was in a rush to see her, consequently
, I rode it so fast that I couldn't notice any obstacles on my way. In addition
to this
, there was a call from my mother and I was disturbed. For
this
reason, there was a flat tyre.
I assure you that I will buy a new balloon and my older brother who is good at repairing can replace it with a new one.
I look forward to receiving your forgiveness for my fault.
Best wishes,
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