The graph below show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph provides the three spreads, which are Margarine,
Low fat
and reduced spreads and butter that were consumed within 26 Correct your spelling
Low-fat
years
. Overall
, three of them increased.
As can be seen, in 1981, Butter started at the highest position which consumed approximately 142 Grams
then
went up around
158 Change preposition
to around
grams
in the next five years
. before it dropped gradually until the end of the period. The same trend was true as Margarine began at around 87 grams
in the first year, which was 1981 and it fluctuated in the next century. After that in the next five years
, the Margarine remained steady at 100 grams
before falling dramatically around about 67 grams
in the next following years
.
On the contrary
, low fat and reduced spreads stood at the lowest position at about 10 gram
in 1996 and it went up Fix the agreement mistake
grams
around
82 Change preposition
to around
grams
in 2001 and it witnessed decreased
till the end of the periodsReplace the word
decrease
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