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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart below represents information about common benefits and drawbacks of Bowen Island,
according to
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people
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Overall
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, it is evident that the most common advantages were
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,
whereas
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 the most common disadvantage was the high cost of living. To commence
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the most beneficial part of the statistics
were
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 the
people
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, which made up 42 %,respectively.
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 in the second place was the scenery, which accounted for 35 %,
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 but not least were the good accommodation and culture, which comprised 11% and 12%, respectively. When it comes to drawbacks,the most common disadvantage was the high cost of living , which made up 50 %,
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 in the second place was entertainment , which accounted for 25%,
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.
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 the weather and food quality had the smallest numbers, which comprised 15% and 10 %. It may be concluded that the most common advantages were the
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 ,
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 the most common drawback was the high prices.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "consequently, whereas".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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