the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The bar chart provides information about the annual
income
of US
households
in three different years: 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there was a general upward trend in most
income
brackets, except for those earning in the middle range, which remained relatively stable.
however
, By the end of the period, the highest proportion of
households
belonged to the highest
income
bracket. In 2007, approximately 25
million
households
reported an
income
of less than $25,000.
This
number
increased to 28
million
in 2011 and
then
slightly decreased to 27
million
in 2015.
Conversely
, the
number
of
households
earning $100,000 or more was 29
million
in 2007 and 28
million
in 2011, and
number
Change the article
a number
the number
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of
household
Change to a plural noun
households
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rose slightly after 4 years
around
Change preposition
to around
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33
million
.
further
Rephrase
Furthermore
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, 26
million
households
earned $25,000 to $49,999 in 2007.
this
number
rose slightly in 2011 and
then
dropped marginally in 2015.
Furthermore
, around 20
million
households
earned $50,000 to $74,999 annually in all three years,
while
15
million
households
earned $75,000 to $99,999 during the same period.
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  • household income
  • income brackets
  • trend analysis
  • income distribution
  • economic policies
  • inflation
  • job market
  • notable shifts
  • overall trend
  • low-income households
  • middle-income households
  • high-income households
  • time periods
  • factors contributing
  • implications
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