the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The bar chart provides information about the annual
income
of US households
in three different years: 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
there was a general upward trend in most income
brackets, except for those earning in the middle range, which remained relatively stable. however
, By the end of the period, the highest proportion of households
belonged to the highest income
bracket.
In 2007, approximately 25 million
households
reported an income
of less than $25,000. This
number
increased to 28 million
in 2011 and then
slightly decreased to 27 million
in 2015. Conversely
, the number
of households
earning $100,000 or more was 29 million
in 2007 and 28 million
in 2011, and number
of Change the article
a number
the number
household
rose slightly after 4 years Change to a plural noun
households
around
33 Change preposition
to around
million
. further
, 26 Rephrase
Furthermore
million
households
earned $25,000 to $49,999 in 2007. this
number
rose slightly in 2011 and then
dropped marginally in 2015.
Furthermore
, around 20 million
households
earned $50,000 to $74,999 annually in all three years, while
15 million
households
earned $75,000 to $99,999 during the same period.Submitted by sadiahussain028 on
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