the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar chart provides information about the annual
income
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of US
households
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in three different years: 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there was a general upward trend in most
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brackets, except for those earning in the middle range, which remained relatively stable.
however
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, By the end of the period, the highest proportion of
households
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belonged to the highest
income
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bracket. In 2007, approximately 25
million
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households
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reported an
income
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of less than $25,000.
This
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number
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increased to 28
million
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in 2011 and
then
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slightly decreased to 27
million
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in 2015.
Conversely
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, the
number
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of
households
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earning $100,000 or more was 29
million
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in 2007 and 28
million
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in 2011, and
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number
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a number
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of
household
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households
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rose slightly after 4 years
around
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to around
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33
million
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.
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further
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, 26
million
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households
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earned $25,000 to $49,999 in 2007.
this
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number
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rose slightly in 2011 and
then
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dropped marginally in 2015.
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, around 20
million
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households
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earned $50,000 to $74,999 annually in all three years,
while
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15
million
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households
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earned $75,000 to $99,999 during the same period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, million, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household income
  • income brackets
  • trend analysis
  • income distribution
  • economic policies
  • inflation
  • job market
  • notable shifts
  • overall trend
  • low-income households
  • middle-income households
  • high-income households
  • time periods
  • factors contributing
  • implications
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