The maps give information about a university sports court.

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university changes

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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nternational tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?