Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news.
The advantages of social
media
providing immediate access to vital global news and connecting people
around the world
outweigh its disadvantages.
First,
social media
is a useful assistant for immediate global awareness and necessary information
and store
it for Wrong verb form
storing
further
use. An enormously large amount of digital information
daily appearing in the global World
Wild Web is impossible to manage manually. As clear evidence of the popularity of social media
around the world
, we can bring statistics. Facebook, Instagram, Telegram, WhatsApp, and LinkedIn count their followers by billions.
Secondly
, another benefit is that social media
enables global communication
, overcoming distance. A contemporary world
diminishes worldwide borders. Thousands of people
for different reasons change contemporary or for good a place of their permanent place of residence. Social media
connects these types of people
with their houses despite distanсе around the world
.
One obvious negative effect of social media
is weak interpersonal relationships. People
’s communication
substitute social media
. It would be 'harder to find hen's teeth' than to find people
free of social media
, in our modern world
. Even close relatives or friends sharing the same living space prefer remote exchange of information
to direct communication
. Once I witnessed a funny situation that happened at a wedding. Friends of a bride were sitting at the same table and chatting with each other via social media
instead
of a natural direct conversation.
Another disadvantage of using social platforms is the spread of misinformation can misinform and endanger. According Pareto principle 80 by 20 around 20 percent of information
may contain 80 percent of searching necessary information
. It means that without the ability to do critical reading people
can be sunk or misled by biased information
overloaded in the media
field. Ability to search and promptly find valid information
that requires good reading and analytical skills.
Overall
, the benefits for people
choosing social media
reflected in immediate access to vital global news and connecting people
around the world
despite distance outweigh the drawbacks such
as traditional forms of communication
and junk information
which the Internet is littered with.Submitted by aakbarov2010 on
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