The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the chart shows the
inforfamtion
about how many people visited Correct your spelling
information
of
three Change preposition
apply
london
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London
meseums
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museums
museum
during
2007 and 2012.
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between
overall
, at first
of the Correct article usage
the first
period
the Add a comma
period,
number
of people who visited national
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the national
gallery
wast
around 7 Correct your spelling
was
millions
and Change to singular
million
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the victoria
victoria
and Capitalize word
Victoria
albert
museum
had highest
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the highest
number
of visitors almost 13 million
,
in 2012 the numbers have
changed , the rate of Unnecessary verb
apply
victoria
and Capitalize word
Victoria
albert
saw Change the capitalization
Albert
downward
trend and decreased to 10 Correct article usage
a downward
million
andthe
rate of Correct your spelling
and the
indivisuals
who visited Correct your spelling
individuals
national
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the national
gallery
increase
significantly Wrong verb form
increased
approximately
16 Change preposition
by approximately
million
.
regarding the biritish
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British
museum
, it saw upward
and downward trend during Correct article usage
an upward
this
years,it started from nearly 12 Correct determiner usage
these
millions
visitors and decreased remarkably to around 6 Change to singular
million
millions
and again Change to singular
million
rised
notably to almost 15 Correct your spelling
rose
millioms
in 2012.
in conclusion,Correct your spelling
million
millions
although
form
the first and the end of Correct your spelling
from
period
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the period
national
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National Gallery
gallery
and victoria
and Capitalize word
Victoria
albert
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Albert Museum
museum
had significant change
, in order the Fix the agreement mistake
changes
number
of national gallery have
increased Wrong verb form
galleries
10
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by 10
million
and Correct article usage
the victoria
victoria
and Capitalize word
Victoria
albert
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Albert
museum
have
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
almost
3 Change preposition
by almost
million
, biritish
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British
museum
has
not Unnecessary verb
apply
changed
much and remains almost in the same Change preposition
by changed
number
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, gallery, victoria, albert, museum, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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