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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish impoerted to the US between 1988 annd 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish impoerted to the US between 1988 annd 2000.
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The pie charts and table illustrate the total revenue and the location where exported fish which was categorized into three countries to the US from 1988 to 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 all sources imported to the US revealed upward trends for the total value,
while
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 the imported fish from
Canada
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 gradually decreased, which was the lowest at 28% in 2000.
To begin
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 with, the number of imported fish from
Canada
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 was the highest, which was over 50%,
whereas
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China
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 exported their merchandise to the US which was only 13%, and the rate of other countries was more than twice of
China
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. In 1992, the whole revenue rose about 2 billion dollars from 6.57 to 8.53. The rate of other countries and
China
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 where export products to the US increased by 19% and 7% respectively, but the proportion dropped to 34% in
Canada
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.
At the end
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 of the period, there was only a rising tendency in
China
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, which reached a peak at 30%;
however
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, the percentage in
Canada
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 and others declined by 6% and 4% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, china with synonyms.
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