The table shows secondary and high school teachers' salaries including their first salary, average per year, highest salary, and how long they need to

The table shows secondary and high school teachers' salaries including their first salary, average per year, highest salary, and how long they need to
The table compares salary changes from secondary and high school teachers in a couple of countries analyzing the starting to Maximum, the money earned per year and the duration taken to have the highest income, in 2009.
Overall
, the countries where the percentage increased by a maximum were Luxembourg. Australia had the greatest drop in salaries.
However
, the only country that projected the lowest quantity of money and reached the highest point in more
years
, was Korea. On the other side, Denmark did not show relevant amounts but got the top wage in fewer
years
. Looking into more detail, in terms of maximum salaries, Luxembourg was the highest ($139.000$) though in
this
category Korea was second ($84.500), followed by Japan ($62.400), next by Denmark and Australia ($48.000). The countries that spent the longest time to be at the top that year were Korea, Japan and Luxembourg at 37, 34 and 30
years
respectively.
In contrast
, in Australia and Denmark, teachers from the 6th level and higher worked 8 to 9
years
to get the top payroll in less period of time. Japan has the lowest earnings when starting a career with $28.000
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