Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However others think this leads to environmental problems, so air trave should be more expensive in order to discourage people from travelling by air.Discuss both sides an give your own opinion.

Low-cost

air

travel

has encouraged ordinary people to

travel

beyond borders and broaden their horizons.I would agree with the view that highly affordable airline services are a blessing to the masses,despite the environmental impact. People who

travel

to different

countries

can have a better understanding of these

countries

and explore more career opportunities.Budget airlines can carry passengers—especially those who

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previously deterred by prohibitive

air

prices—to different

countries

,where they can learn about the labour market and different ways of life.Some of them may find that they have skills and knowledge well sought after in local communities thereby applying for a work visa to stay there to earn a living. One prime example is the mass movement of migrant workers from Southeast Asia to richer

countries

in search of jobs in the 1990s, which coincided with a substantial increase in discounted

air

services around the world.They would not have been able to explore the opportunity to maximise the value of their labour

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if the cost of flights remained exorbitant and discouraged them from travelling abroad. At the same time, some people argue that raising airfares can help reduce the environmental impact of the airline industry.

Air

service regulators can pass laws to require passengers to pay fuel tax for each flight they take and force them to avoid non-essential

travel

.

This

is certain to reduce the demand for outbound flights, meaning that greenhouse gas emissions attributed to avian fuel consumption will drop.

This

can help fight global warming,an environmental woe

that is

linked to the staggering accumulation of gases

such

as carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.

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I do not think it is necessary to make

air

services expensive to potential passengers,as inbound and outbound flights can have an enormous impact on the economy. The arrival of visitors can bring in cash which is needed for businesses of either big

countries

or remote communities, ranging from hospitality,

catering

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to shopping.Soaring

air

fares can arrest the development of the tourism sector and companies involved can suffer a drop in profit and even go bankrupt.

Instead

of curbing

air

travel

, authorities may consider other methods,

such

as the improvement of fuel economy and the use of biofuel, to reduce the carbon footprint of each passenger.