The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The maps illustrate how
West
Park
Secondary School
changed over a 60-year period from 1950 to 2010.
Generally, it is clear that
the West
Park
Secondary School
experienced striking
transformation. Most noticeably, the increases in Correct article usage
a striking
car
Add an article
the car
a car
park
and Fix the agreement mistake
parks
school
(main building), the elimination of the houses and the farmland, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
the
area of sports fields and playgrounds Correct word choice
and the
has
been reduced.
The Change the verb form
have
school
(main building) was it
located in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
south east
of the Correct your spelling
southeast
park
remained unchanged overtime
. The playground was situated in the Correct your spelling
over time
south east
stayed unchanged but it has been scaled back. Add to that the appearanceAdd a hyphen
south-east
a
sports field. The location of Change preposition
of a
main
road remained after 60 years.
The houses and farmland Change the article
the main
was
situated in the Change the verb form
were
south
Correct your spelling
southwest
west
of the town removed to make way for the development of a car park
, a
sports field with a science block from 1950 to 1980, and to 2010 the car Correct word choice
and a
park
, the science block continues to be expanded, whereas
the sport
field in the Change the noun form
sports
south
Add a hyphen
south-west
west
there is a change of position.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west, park, school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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