the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.
The given map depicts the
two
proposed locations of a novel super market
, which Correct your spelling
supermarket
planned
to be situated in Garlsdon town.
From an Add a missing verb
is planned
overall
perspective, the difference between the two
sites, as it is clearly seen in
the map, is that S1 will be located in the rural zone, meanwhile, S2 will be erected Change preposition
on
to be
in the town centre.
Verb problem
apply
To begin
with, the first possible site
will be in the north-west
of the town, which will be near Hindon city about 12 Correct your spelling
northwest
kilometer
with a population of 10,000. Change to a plural noun
kilometers
This
predicted site
will be far away from the residential area, but almost next to the industrial zone. Moreover
, the site
will be reached either by train or main road.
To
contrast, the second proposed location is projected to be inside the city center. The industrial area will surround it, and the residential zones will be situated both one in the north, and the next would be in the south. Change preposition
In
Besides
, the two
ways of transport are possible, yet the railway is going to be better. In addition
, S2 is going to be a good site
as it is going to near
the Add a missing verb
be near
two
cities called Cransdon and Bransdon.Submitted by f201600285 on
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