The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog
Presented for consideration is a cycle giving information about different stages of a frog during its life.
The most noticeable point about the cycle is that sheds light on the development of a frog through 6 stages beginning with eggs and ending with an adult frog.
Additionally
, having completed all these steps, the lifecycle will then
begin again.
The most logical point to start at is the eggs, shown as frogspawn, which float on the surface of the lake. The next step after
this
is the emergence of the small tadpole
after the frogspawn hatches. At this
point in the cycle, the small tadpole
has a small body with a long tail, Over time, the tadpole
grows, and its body become
bigger Change the verb form
becomes
while
the tail becomes longer.At the same time, the legs begin to form so as to prepare the tadpole
's future life on land.
EvenSubmitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words tadpole with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼