You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing in regard to a recent article published related my home town Delhi in your leaflets, the
information
is misleading and incorrect.
Delhi is the capital of India not just any state, routes are not clearly mentioned for famous Parks and Historical buildings in the city.
In order, to maintain the quality of the information
being provided by your organisation, the information
needed to be changed with name correction and proper and valid sources.
The changes must take place immediately, as the reputation of my nation and your organization is at stake. Please confirm your information
with trustworthy resources and take into account my suggestions.
Sincerely,
RajSubmitted by deep4u4all1 on
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task achievement
You should provide a bit more detail or examples to fully develop your response. For instance, you could mention specific incorrect details and the correct information.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, well-developed idea to improve the overall clarity and flow of your writing.
coherence cohesion
Appropriate greeting and closing.
task achievement
Clear and polite tone used throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite