The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.
The map shows a developing
campus
throughout the year of 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, there are 5 big buildings located separately and one wide lake around the land campus
. Those buildings are connected by road and trees are also
spread infrequently around every side of campus
. Most of the areas of this
campus
are barren and missing the beauty aspects of nature.
There is one complex building near the lake which contains student facilities, shops offices, etc. In front of it located two buildings dorm made for student to accommodate their place to live. The science building is placed across the art building divided by the road of the campus
. Lastly
, another student accommodation is located far and is separated from the other building but it still could be reached by road.Submitted by pocutarifahzahrina on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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