The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper.

the diagram depicts the data about steps of how to make

pulp

and

paper

having a total of three stages in the first stage of the process, logs are cut from the long tress which is passed through the wheeler for chipping after that crushing

and

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purchased chips are put into

digester

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to refine a clean

pulp

next,

the

pulp

is passed through the rolling washers for cleaning

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as a

result a clean

pulp

is produced

furthermore

, in the next

stage

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the clean

pulp

are

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divided into two groups for making rough

paper

for boxes

first,

it is passed through the

pulp

former

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machine

then

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and then

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through

dryer

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the dryer

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before cutting the

pulp

and turning

into

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it into

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boxes it is passed through the rounded reel in the

thrid

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third

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stage, the purified

pulp

is again taken into cleaner once it is free from drying machine they are

then

passed to the presser making them round shape and again through the dryer before the final product of rolling

paper

is formed

overall

, it is vividly manifested that it is a linear process and

contained

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three stages,

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beginning

begining

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beginning

with the extraction of clean

pulp

to

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making

main

maing

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making

two new products

such

as rough

paper

and refined

paper