your neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen A nice, respectful style.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
finds you well. I wanted to talk about you
Change the pronoun
your
dog
last
night. The dog
that you found the
next to the palace. That Correct article usage
apply
dog
seemed smart and cute but it was wrong to draw a first conclusion. Day and night it walks through our tiny garden however
barks a lot. I would not have written it but it is not only
thing that was done to my house.
There is Add an article
the only
only
thing that we must do is give it to Add an article
the only
military
. There Add an article
the military
was
a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
lot
Add the preposition
lot of
ideas
to give Change the noun form
idea
this
dog
but the dog
that found
near the palace is Add a missing verb
was found
suspectful
. I think it looks like a Correct your spelling
suspect
german
hunter. Capitalize word
German
military
guy will appreciate it.
My Correct article usage
The military
sorries
that I Correct your spelling
worries
send
you Wrong verb form
am sending
this
. If you do not want to give him if he has a name, just please close your garden door or just string it. Best regards and my sorries,
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Task Achievement
In terms of Task Achievement, it's crucial to address the topic directly and provide a clear reason for writing. The letter should explicitly state the issue (the dog barking) and offer a reasonable solution, not an extreme one like giving the dog to the military, which may not be seen as feasible or relevant.
Coherence and Cohesion
For a higher score in Coherence and Cohesion, structure your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. Start with a proper introduction to your concern, follow with a paragraph detailing the problem, then suggest a solution, and conclude respectfully. The logical progression of ideas is essential for clarity.
Task Achievement
Use an appropriate and consistent tone throughout the letter. A formal or semi-formal tone is expected in such scenarios. Avoid casual language or phrases that might seem disrespectful or overly informal. Phrases like 'My sorries' are too informal; instead, use 'I apologize' or 'I am sorry for any inconvenience'.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure to greet and close your letter more formally and personalised if possible. 'Dear Sir or Madam' is a good start, but closing with 'Best regards' followed by your name (as you did) is better suited. Make sure to align your closing with the overall tone of your letter.