In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
Looking at the past and current times we can see that
same-
sex
schools
stayed as popular as they were. At the same time, it is not popular everywhere, I can suppose that in Asian countries it is way
more used than in Europe or America. As I thought about this
, I think parents choose this
exact way
for their kids to study to prevent relationships between girls
and boys
and also
to educate girls
as “girls
” and the same things with
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as
boys
, some of them choose this
because it aligns with their religious beliefs. But I don’t prefer this
way
of studying as a student and if I were a parent I would never choose this
for my child.
From my personal point, there is no socialization for kids who are studying at same-
sex
schools
, they are getting used only for their sex
, but in the future, they are going to deal with the opposite sex
. For instance
: at work, where they possibly have to work in a team or if they are working alone and need some help and the person who is helper is opposite sex
it will be hard to receive this
help. Also
, not every university has a same-
sex
system, so it would be hard not to be stressed in a new environment. Furthermore
, for students of same-
sex
schools
, it is hard to build relationships, of course, they can see an example of love from their family but they don’t have any opportunity to experience this
.
The way
that same-
sex
schools
treat their students by their sex
is not fair. Talking about girls
, these schools
are unconcerned if it’s cold or girls
are uncomfortable by
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apply
this
, because “uniform is uniform”. Girls
are cooking and boys
are building something that supports the view of unequal rights, because why can’t girls
or boys
do the same things? In contrast
, co-educational schools
have the same educational system for everyone, both girls
and boys
study the same things, and for some creative subjects, classes are for everyone without any exceptions. Moreover
, almost every co-educational institution doesn’t have any uniform, but if they have students have the option to choose either pants or a skirt.
To conclude
, I think co-educational institutions are way
better for people to choose, for socialization, equal rights, and expanded options to study subjects.Submitted by wegeeetz on
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