many musseums charge for admission while others are free. do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outwegiht the disadvantages?

Many
museums
are charging
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entrance
fee
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fees
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from
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the visitors
while
others are free. I definitely believe that charging
people
for admission
have
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a lot of advantages especially to maintain certain important
operation
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operations
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in the
museum
.
Museums
are one out of many public facilities that are vital to
people
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educations
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,
although
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goverment
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government
were
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the only
intitution
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institution
institutions
that
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responsible
to
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for
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the
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museum
operations
, to put all reliant
to
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on
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a public institution
in maintaining
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to maintain
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the
operations
on
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of
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certain public facilities might be ended in sub-standard service quality. It is because most public
intitutions
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institutions
only provide
limited
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budget to spend in managing the operation of the
museum
while
most of their spending
are
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focus
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on other important issues
such
as healthcare and infrastructure.
Therefore
museum
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museums
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nowadays
are
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difficult to maintain certain
operations
such
as cleanliness and
convenient
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atmosphere. Charging
fare
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to the
visitiors
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visitors
might
be draw
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many advantages for the
museum
operations
.
This
means that
museum
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is not put all
its
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apply
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reliant
to
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on
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goverment
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government
body
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because
it
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they
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can provide
itself
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with
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the income they get from the visitors.
Moreover
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this
policy would make
museum
management more independent and creative
especially
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in promoting certain events or
to provide
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providing
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people
with value added
service
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that
beneficial
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for them
for example
provide
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historical story in complement with new technology to create
more
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interactive and fun experience.
At the end
of the day
people
will grow
interest
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interested
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to visit
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in visiting
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museum
which provides
such
services and
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the museum
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museum
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museums
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would be benefited
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in return. In my conclusion,
i
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definitely believe that charging visitors fees would help
museums
in maintaining or rather improve many services that
beneficial
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and needed by the community.
Although
that policy is beneficial,
museums
have to pay attention
in
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to
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pricing strategy so that it
really
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connected with the goals and not the other way around.
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