the diagram below shows how a refrigerator works.
The diagram below illustrates how a refrigerator works.
Overall
, as we can see, there is a high-pressure liquid evaporator that
located in the refrigerator. There are 4 steps, how heat from food goes through the evaporator.
In Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
process, heat from food goes through the big tube
to warm a low pressure
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low-pressure
gas
. The low pressured
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low-pressured
gas
is gone through, by the compressor to be compressed. After being compressed, we take hot high-pressure gas
from low pressure
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low-pressure
gas
.
The heat of the gas
is transferred to atmosphere
. Other Add an article
the atmosphere
gas
that has been left, goes through the long tube
called condenser
. Correct article usage
a condenser
Then
gas
goes from the ordinary tube
to the smaller tube
, that has known as capillary
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the capillary
tube
. After all that step the process will be repeated again and again.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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