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The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.

The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
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The line chart compares the number of
rubber
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ducks
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 exported from three different areas including
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EU
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the EU
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,the
USA
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 and the UK between 2013 and 2017.
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,the vast majority of
rubber
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ducks
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 were from
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EU
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the EU
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 in the given time, whilst the
rubber
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 duck exports from the
USA
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 were the least.
According to
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 the information shown in the graph, there were 30 thousand
rubber
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ducks
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 exported from
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EU
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the EU
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 in 2013 which was three times more than that from the
USA
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 in the same year.
However
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, the exports of
rubber
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ducks
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 from
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EU
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the EU
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 in 2015 were one-third less than that in 2014 which were only 20000
rubber
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ducks
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 and even fewer than that from the UK. What should be particularly mentioned was that the ones from the
USA
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 kept at the least amounts in the given period and even dropped to almost one thousand in 2017.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rubber, ducks, eu, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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