Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The map given illustrates how the developments of Chorleywood
village
in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years.
Overall
, the development
of works in this
rural area
proceeded much rapidly
during the Correct quantifier usage
more rapidly
last
year compared to previous decades.
Looking at the map in more detail, at the beginning of the period, improvement in the village
was limited. It can be seen that only the area
that is
located close to the station witnessed some development
of works, however
, there was just the main road which had been constructed in the village
. The motorway was built in 1970 and it connected to the main road in the east of the Chorleywood area
.
Further
, at the same time between 1922 and 1970, there was a huge establishment in the southwest of the village
. It is worth noticing that development
was focused in the western part only until 1970. Further
, in the last
period, the village
went through a large-scale progress in the eastern part, which has been being
an undeveloped Unnecessary verb
apply
area
for over a century. The railway was constructed in 1909 was
across the station Unnecessary verb
apply
area
followed by a wider development
that happened alongside the railway and main road.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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