Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The map given illustrates how the developments of Chorleywood
village
in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years.
Overall
, the
development
of works in
this
rural
area
proceeded much
rapidly
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during the
last
year compared to previous decades. Looking at the map in more detail, at the beginning of the period, improvement in the
village
was limited. It can be seen that only the
area
that is
located close to the station witnessed some
development
of works,
however
, there was just the main road which had been constructed in the
village
. The motorway was built in 1970 and it connected to the main road in the east of the Chorleywood
area
.
Further
, at the same time between 1922 and 1970, there was a huge establishment in the southwest of the
village
. It is worth noticing that
development
was focused in the western part only until 1970.
Further
, in the
last
period, the
village
went through a large-scale progress in the eastern part, which has been
being
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an undeveloped
area
for over a century. The railway was constructed in 1909
was
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across the station
area
followed by a wider
development
that happened alongside the railway and main road.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, last".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, development, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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