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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. Punishment is necessary to learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In childhood, it is necessary that pupils can learn how to make
difference
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 in right or wrong activities. Some people think that to learn
this
, punishment is necessary but I
am disagree
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 with it. In
this
 essay, I will discuss my reasons
of
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 disagreement in upcoming paragraphs.
First
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 and foremost reason is promoting violence. If
children
 make
mistake
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mistakes
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 it does not mean that we have
punish
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to punish
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 them to realize
them
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apply
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that they did something wrong. It creates
violence
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 behaviour in them. They will
also
 start treating others like
this
.
For example
,
parents
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if parents
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 punish their
pupil
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pupils
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 for not performing well in school exams
then
 it affects negatively on mindset of
children
like
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they will
also
 start treating their friends like that if they have any arguments.
This
 will
also
 end
up
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the relationship between them.
Secondly
, toddlers remember what they learn
in
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their
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 early age.
Parents
 have to treat them with love and affection if they make any mistake and try to spend time
them
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with them
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 as much as possible or give them general
jnowledge
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knowledge
 of life
that
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and
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 how they can deal with different
thing
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things
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 in their
life
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lives
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.
Parents
also
 have to ignore fighting or follow
rules
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the rules
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 of the society where they live.
Children
 always follow their
parents
. They do not have to put much
efforts
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effort
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 towards their
children
 if they are good
person
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people
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 in their life. In my opinion,
parents
 can tell their
children
 stories in their early stage during night time which have a conclusion in the end about what is right or wrong for
healthy
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the healthy
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 living style it affects
children's
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children
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 a lot because after listening
stories
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to stories
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 they can start thinking about the matter of story and they will be capable in making difference between right and wrong things.
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