You are studying English at the private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party.In your letter: Explain the reason for the party Give the data and time of the party Suggest what the classmate could being to the party
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Dear Valery,
What's cooking, good looking? Oh my darling, how are you doing , I hope you are well as always.
I had the hardest time to
writing
Change the form of the verb
write
this
letter. You know our friend Alex from Paris in
a bad mood he missed his family but the reason for Add a missing verb
is in
that is
some vandals messed up his favourite fluffy dog. We're trying to give these wretches a chance but I reckon we will gave
Alex some good mood with deal his birthday Change the verb form
give
one
top of the world.
I know you master of understatement, as Correct your spelling
on
usual
but I like to make an impact. Add the comma(s)
usual,
This
party will held in the big restaurant Fairy Tale of
March 27 at night 20:00. I suppose Change preposition
on
restaurant
would be Correct article usage
a restaurant
fine
place to celebrate Add an article
a fine
birthday
party.As a rule, It's a bit early to be thinking about organisations of different singers and famous Add an article
a birthday
the birthday
people's
but that will be decided later.
That's sound odd but I know you are not Change noun form
people
grubby
girl. You Add an article
a grubby
the grubby
coul
draw a portrait of Alex I know you are very good at Correct your spelling
could
this
your drawing
are quite fabulous nothing Fix the agreement mistake
drawings
wonder
of that!
I wish you all the best. See you soon!
Warm wishes,
ArthurFix the agreement mistake
wonders
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Greeting and Introduction
Begin with a clear greeting and concise introduction of the letter's purpose. Avoid colloquial expressions that might not be understood in a formal context.
Task Achievement
For task response, ensure you answer all parts of the question directly and clearly. Explicitly mention the surprise birthday party, the reason for it, and how the classmate can contribute.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively. Each paragraph should cover a single idea related to the party’s details, the invitation, and the request for contribution.
Tone and Style
Adopt a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly informal language and colloquialisms when writing for an academic or formal context.
Relevance and Clarity
Refrain from including unrelated or unclear information that does not directly support the letter's purpose. Focus on clarity and relevance to the task.
