The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the sales of mobiles counted in millions from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
, except Samsung
and Apple, the sales rates declined by 2012 compared to 2006. Change preposition
for Samsung
Samsumg
company were the leading Correct your spelling
Samsung
purchased
compared to all others Replace the word
purchase
while
Motorola and Ericsson were the lowest.
To begin
with, Ericsson increased greatly in 2007 reaching 102 million
, after that, it was
declined gradually till it reached only 28 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
. Motorola started with 210 million
the highest of all phones except Nokia but it was also
decreasing steadily till it reached the same as Ericsson.
In addition
, Samsung experienced the
major advance out of all the four others reaching almost 400,000000 in 2006 competed by Nokia but it could not have reached it. Apple did not exist in 2006 but developed in 2007 started with the lowest buyers only 2.3 Correct article usage
a
million
but continued growing to 135.8 million
in the last
year. Furthermore
, Nokia was the top in the beginning year with 345 million
then
started fluctuating in the coming years somewhere decreasing then
increasing eventually reaching 335 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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