The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The information about the ratio of forests in five different
kind
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of areas and how much wood is produced from
that
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forests is illustrated by a given pictorial representation. The data has been calibrated in
percential
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percentile
percentual
value.
To sum up
, it can be vividly manifested that the maximum dominance is given to North
America
,
While
South
America
represents the lowest point. Upon initial examination of the chart, it is evident that the percentage of forest in Africa is 27% which is followed by South
America
with 16%,
Whereas
a minimal disparity is seen between Asia and Europe which is 14% and 18%, respectively.
Further
analysis reveals that the proportion of woodland in North
America
is 25%. Analyzing the data
further
, there has been a difference of 3% between
in
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the figures of timber in South
America
and Europe,
however
twice as much wood is
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in Asia at 18% as compared to Africa. Henceforward, the fraction of timber in North
America
stands at 30%.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • afforestation
  • biodiversity
  • conservation
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sequestration
  • land use
  • temperate
  • tropical
  • subtropical
  • arid
  • degradation
  • reforestation
  • habitat
  • old-growth
  • primary forest
  • secondary forest
  • logging
  • environmental policy
  • climate mitigation
  • carbon footprint
  • flora and fauna
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