The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The information about the ratio of forests in five different

kind

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of areas and how much wood is produced from

that

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forests is illustrated by a given pictorial representation. The data has been calibrated in

percential

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percentile

percentual

value.

To sum up

, it can be vividly manifested that the maximum dominance is given to North

America

While

South

America

represents the lowest point. Upon initial examination of the chart, it is evident that the percentage of forest in Africa is 27% which is followed by South

America

with 16%,

Whereas

a minimal disparity is seen between Asia and Europe which is 14% and 18%, respectively.

Further

analysis reveals that the proportion of woodland in North

America

is 25%. Analyzing the data

further

, there has been a difference of 3% between

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the figures of timber in South

America

and Europe,

however

twice as much wood is

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in Asia at 18% as compared to Africa. Henceforward, the fraction of timber in North

America

stands at 30%.

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5Linking words
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4 paragraphs

164 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The majority of news is being reported bad news such as wars famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think news should be balance of good news and bad news?

Many people believe that social networking websites such as FB and Instagram have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?