In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional food while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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amoung

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among

different parts of the globe that cultural meals are preferably

more

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good

to

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compared with

junk

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a junk

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diet

.

However

,others who support

says

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say

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that

fast-

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fast food

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food

is

equally

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an equally

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good choice.I opine

,

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apply

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traditional

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that traditional

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food

is more nutritional and

it

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represents culture.

This

essay will discuss both views. On the one hand,regional

food

is not only not nutritional but

also

it is the representation of the culture. Considering,

this

sort of

diet

exhibit

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exhibits

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the local values and

taste

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tastes

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which is

staple

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staples

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to the people living

in particular

areas. Taking

this

into account, in Rajasthan, India,

majority

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the majority

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of

food

is prepared with millets and bajra which is cultivated locally as it supports the bodily requirements of the community.

Therefore

,

the

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traditional

food

holds its significance in comparison to globally open chain restaurants.

On the other hand

, the chain meals are definitely on

tastier

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the tastier

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side.

Also

,

this

type of

diet

is leading to globalisation.

For instance

, tourists do not have to suffer taste

difference

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differences

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while

on vacations as they can easily eat from

food

chain restaurants throughout the place like

subway

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,

Although

despite being tasty and readily available in the market,

this

diet

is expensive which means not everyone can

afford

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afford it

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. In conclusion, nowadays many

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are comparing traditional

food

with fast

food

.

However

, I believe

local

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locally

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made

food

is

far

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a far

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better choice because of

it's

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nutritional value than fast good meals.