In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional food while others believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is
debatable
topic Correct article usage
a debatable
amoung
different parts of the globe that cultural meals are preferably Correct your spelling
among
more
good Correct quantifier usage
apply
to
compared with Change preposition
apply
junk
Correct article usage
a junk
diet
.Use synonyms
However
,others who support Linking Words
says
that Correct subject-verb agreement
say
fast-
Correct your spelling
fast food
food
is Use synonyms
equally
good choice.I opineAdd an article
an equally
,
Remove the comma
apply
traditional
Correct word choice
that traditional
food
is more nutritional and Use synonyms
it
represents culture. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand,regional Linking Words
food
is not only not nutritional but Use synonyms
also
it is the representation of the culture. Considering,Linking Words
this
sort of Linking Words
diet
Use synonyms
exhibit
the local values and Correct subject-verb agreement
exhibits
taste
which is Fix the agreement mistake
tastes
staple
to the people living Fix the agreement mistake
staples
in particular
areas. Taking Linking Words
this
into account, in Rajasthan, India, Linking Words
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
food
is prepared with millets and bajra which is cultivated locally as it supports the bodily requirements of the community. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
the
traditional Correct article usage
apply
food
holds its significance in comparison to globally open chain restaurants.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the chain meals are definitely on Linking Words
tastier
side. Add an article
the tastier
Also
, Linking Words
this
type of Linking Words
diet
is leading to globalisation. Use synonyms
For instance
, tourists do not have to suffer taste Linking Words
difference
Fix the agreement mistake
differences
while
on vacations as they can easily eat from Linking Words
food
chain restaurants throughout the place like Use synonyms
subway
, Capitalize word
Subway
Although
despite being tasty and readily available in the market, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
diet
is expensive which means not everyone can Use synonyms
afford
.
In conclusion, nowadays many Correct pronoun usage
afford it
group
are comparing traditional Change to a plural noun
groups
food
with fast Use synonyms
food
. Use synonyms
However
, I believe Linking Words
local
made Change the adjective
locally
food
is Use synonyms
far
better choice because of Add an article
a far
the far
it's
nutritional value than fast good meals.Replace the word
its
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